Tuesday 19 January 2010

Jack Storer Feedback

1 comments:

Andy Hampson said...

Research on other films done but very limited currently L1 far more detail needed and use of media language. This needs to be detailed as it will feed into your final mark. Where is your lessons learnt from the foundation? I would like to see some hyperlinks to the films and know how they have influenced you and the group. L1 You will have time to improve this later on