Showing posts with label Jack Storer. Show all posts
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Wednesday, 28 April 2010

Jack Storer - Evaluation


We have now completed all 3 of our products,
these include.
• A Short Social Realist Film lasting 6 minutes titled 'MILO'





• A Film Poster Advertising 'Milo'



• A Review in the house style of Little White Lies




I am really pleased with all 3 of the pieces and believe the fact we worked so well as a group is what resulted in this.



In What Way Does Your Media Products Use, Develop or Challenge forms of real media conventions?

Firstly the film. we chose to create a social realism film, out of the choices Social realism, Thriller or Horror.

why? simply because we as a group agreed we have a better technical understanding of British social realism and the fact that social realism usually has a low budget and is usually British.

it also has this effect on people


*EMBEDDING OF THIS VIDEO HAS BEEN DISABLED BY THE BBC. TO VIEW PLEASE VISIT http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wj9yvVDwhX0*


which is at huge credit to the directors as it shows it doesn't take huge stars, mind blowing CGI effects and a Hollywood size promotions budget to make a film visually stunning and entertaining.

Our film is a short 6minute social realism piece. (film can be viewed at the top of this post)

we studied many British social realist films in lesson and many short social realist films in our own time to then select the conventions we wanted to carry into our own work. we studied films such as Wasp by Andrea Arnold. here is my review.





SOCIAL REALISM - the gritty reality of the working class is really strong in this piece, the dirty sequence of the poor children taking the spare ribs off the car park floor is really moving.

this entire film is so unique she really pushes this gritty british drama to the next stage with the extremity of all shots. i think aswell as being visually and textually powerful it has a simple and effective storyline.
This simple storline fits the short film format amazingly it allows Andrea Arnold to really experiment with shots and what we see. the storyline doesn't need the kids to swear but when they do it just brings the extreme reality to the audience.
the soundtrack was really effective and used almost completly diegetic sound also having the children sing along to the background music at the bar is a really powerful scene it really pushes the fact that they are just children, and they want to just relax and have fun its not their fault they where born into poverty and they don't get to choose their mother.
the themes and issues of this are really clear its the presure thats put on single young mothers in poor conditions and the choices they have to make to protect their kids but how they still try to juggle a social life. as an audience i think we are really put on the side of the kids as we see the shots from outside the car almost a POV of the children.

Director: Andrea Arnold
Writer: Andrea Arnold

won : oscar - best short film - live action

• Themes and issues

we decided right at the beginning of the project we wanted our protagonist to be a young boy. mainly to create a slightly more unique point of view as well as to avoid the A Level faux par of just getting a friend to act for you. also we had watched a lot of shorts by this point and had all agreed a couple of the more powerful films where 'Eight' Directed by Stephen Daldry. (which was really moving and had some great long takes of the boy watching football with a friend) and 'Mixtape' by Luke Snellin this was a really good fun film and was also from the point of view of a young boy played by Son of Randbow star Bill Milner. after writing a review of this film for my research and planning I was lucky enough to get a mention on Luke Snellin's personal blog.
you can see the post here. This was an great surprise to me, and really helped give my enthusiasm for this piece an extra boost.

we then moved on to discuss domestic violence which is common in social realist films and clearly a main point in the film Slap by Uriel Emil Pollack.


"a moving social realist piece which focuses on the real life issue of an abused wife. this story is clearly social realist it plays on emotions of realistic stories and the effect it has on characters.
the one thing about this that stands out as unique is the main characters does the opposite of what we as an audience want her to do. we see her imagine how easy it would be to leave her abusing husband as he 's choking on his dinner. this dream sequence is really effective and we feel asi its happening and then suddenly she chooses not to it snaps back into the room and she goes over and helps her choking husband.
the short film format of this is really effective as it lasts the length of her husband choking but we see flash backs of her lying beaten on her bed and the dream sequence of her leaving. these jumps on time and location are edited well. and would be somthing i would like to attempt in my film but is also very risky i think the whole story would fall apart if they where not edited in so effectively.
the soundtrack is effective as it plays a background role throughout. but i think the visual side of this is what makes it.
the themes and issues are so drastic that we really feel for the lead character."




• Camera work and angles

Lots of hand held! this is something we noticed in many social realist pieces and i think this really puts you there and makes it seem real and is something we tried to use as much as possible, I really like it in this shot...



I think the cramped framing really puts us next to Milo and gives us a feel of being there with him as well as contrasting with this shot that comes next,





which works well to show us even though we relate to him he is so isolated in the situation he is in.

I think the most effective shot of our entire film was the tracking shot lasting 24 seconds. i think this works really well, during discussions for this shot 24 seconds seemed far too long for a single shot of Milo running, but then we looked up the tracking short from 400blows a French new wave film from the legendary François Truffaut as seen here....








this lasts a massive 1 minute 20 yet still holds such power. after we saw this as a group the tracking shot of Milo was a must. although 400 blows was not a British social realist film it was still relevant as French new wave strived for authenticity, similar to the British social realism which strives to create an accurate representation of Britain.

here are stills from both Milo and 4oo Blows
, I love the similarity between them, almost a homage to Truffaut's work.



also a vital point of the camera work was the short depth of field we managed to create using such a high definition camera.



as you can see this really helps separate the parents from Milo and the short depth of field was somthing we had noticed in many social realist films we have looked at. such as this shot from Luke Snellin's Mixtape





• Colour & Lighting

we used desaturated colour which is a common feature of British social realist films usually a result of the directors using natural lighting causing the film to over/under expose slightly. we used a digital film with the white balance set so we recreated this effect in final cut pro. you can see the use of desaturated colour in films such as Fish Tank by Andrea Arnold





we also used as much natural lighting (which is an important convention of social realism) as possible which I think worked well on shots such as this....


I also think this shot works really well as it highlights just how small Milo is. which makes the whole scenareo that little bit more powerful.
here is also a still from This is England demonstrating the use of natural lighting









this is the only sequence in which we used artificial lighting, we used it to back up and emphasise the light from Milo's hand held torch. i think the use of a reflector helped disguise this well.






• Props
we used very few props in our film, and tried to create iconography from the props we did use. for example the alcohol bottles.


we also used the actors own clothes, own bedroom and in the scene where he is hiding under covers we got him to build the 'den' himself. all this contributed to the authenticity of the piece.


• Structure
we spent a large portion of the research time looking at the structure of short films. and found that the majority of short films spend very little time on the equilibrium at the start of the linear structure and we are thrown straight into the story for example
Joyride,

"
the short film format was used really effectively as the loose ends of the story where not tied up. this saved a lot of time for the main event. yet it still had a start middle and end. Just spent very little time on the opening. I really like this idea and think we will definitely take this and try and use this in our piece. a full length film is criticised for having too many unclosed storylines but I believe with short films this makes them more interesting. 'Enigma' "

this is a quote from my original study of Joyride back in January of this year.


this means we avoid getting to know the characters before the 'event' of the film takes place which meant we had to let the audience get to know Milo throughout so as the closure of the film comes we are familiar and have made all the nessecary connections with him as a character. i think this has worked well i also think disguising the parents faces means the audience is completely focused on Milo rather than the arguments his parents have. also this was to show the distance there is between the father and Milo .



• Editing/straight cuts

We are not following the conventions of social realism trying to disguise the edits to make the video flow as much as possible, this continuity editing is a convention of social realism. the aim of continuity is to make the cuts as seemless as possible this was best explained to me when we saw this video in class




The only part of our project in which i believe we wear challenging the conventions of social realism was the location. most social realism films are set in the city and usually up north.




but as a group we really wanted to make alot of the countryside that surrounded this nice detached house. I think this idea really gives a new angle on the genre, we summed this up as a group as the idea that

"broken homes don't only exist in broken cities"

which was one of the suggestions for a tag line.

as you can see we have taken a great deal of inspiration from many directors but one in particular i think really deserves a mention is Ken Loach who is a true master of Social Realism who's latest film 'Looking for Eric' which is such a powerful piece was nominated for the golden palm award at the Cannes Film Festival.

In conclusion to the question I believe our media product uses the standard conventions of Social Realist Genre to its own strength following as closely as possible yet i believe with the use of the rural location we have challenged the standard conventions enough to give our film a unique edge.


How effective is the combination of your main product with your 2 ancillary tasks?

The Review.

Firstly we wrote this review as if it was to be printed to the magazine little white lies. http://www.littlewhitelies.co.uk/ so before we even started to think about making the review we did some research into the house style of the magazine. And found

• Each issue has a ‘Feature Film’ a film that is a reoccurring theme throughout that issue. Here are some covers of a few as examples.







• Key pages are reflected in every issue that relate too this ‘Feature Film’ such as these.






The double page spread, usually on the first 2 pages of the magazine it is a wallposter effect, sporting a quote from the film.




Also the credits at the end take a piece of the ‘feature film’ and relate it to themselves. This is just abit of fun at the end of each issue

So to really get to know the magazine Alex and I decided to create these pages as if ‘Milo’ our short film was the feature film of an issue. So I used photoshop to mock up a couple of quick images paying a lot of attention to the small details of little white lies.





I really think the time Alex and I spent studying these little details is what really gave us a feel for the magazine. So when it came to the layout of the review we were confident.


Then we got too writing the review.

Here is an example of little white lies review

And here is ours



As you can see we have manage to match the layout all the way down to the ‘key film’ page numbers.

As for the text.

here is some quotes so you can see the language used in these reviews.. One of theirs


"
A striking work of shattering simplicity that details a grieving society slowly coming to terms with its past"

and a quote from ours

"
short social realism piece drenched with the stark realities of everyday life. "


we tried to give an accurate intellectual look on our piece without using too much film terminology.


In conclusion of the review I believe we have managed to create a really effective review that would work well if Little White Lies were to create a ‘Milo’ issue.

this is our poster design.


• the first thing I noticed when we started to look at British film posters was that alot more of them are Landscape than Hollywood films which all seem to be portrait as demonstrated below







so this was the first decision made.

• next was the image style originally i Sketched this up using Photoshop I really like the artistic style this gave off which would hopefully reflect the artistic side of our film



then Caroline advanced this to...




then as a group we decided we would create a single line sketch made uip of our monologue, here is a rough mock up of that idea



but before I completely finished this idea I really wasn't happy with it, it didn't hold enough depth to represent our film and I believed it wouldn't have done our film justice, so we gathered the group up and I explained the problem. luckily we chatted about it and all agreed that it would be a waste of time completing that if I didn't think it would look as effective as we had first planned so we agreed on Caroline's image which I then further edited it until we found a final composition and framing which we all liked.



• then we added the Cannes film festival logo, this really helps bring in the audience, people will recognise this and will then know the standard of the piece.

we also selected the quote

"Creative, Captivating and Compelling"



I think this alliteration really pushes the idea of the piece being deep and moving.

also we decided that we should hide the location, we didn't want to put off the city audience who like social realism because it is so urban, so we created the poster in such a way that it is location-less, this could quite easily be a boy in the middle of Manchester.



I think as a social realist piece this works well, the directors box, quote and awards help bring the piece to life.

As a combination, a film poster and a review help summarise the campaign that would run along side 'Milo' if it was too be released through distribution. also the choice of Little White Lies was made as it is the most likely magazine to promote a low budget British short film. there would be no point creating a review in the style of Total Film as they promote high concept Hollywood movies. it would be unrealistic for on one page to have Gerard butler blowing up buildings and on the next a small boy having problems at his countryside house in a village called Turners Hill in Sussex.

What Have You Learnt Through Audience Feedback?

We used the internet for our feedback to allow us to reach as many people in our target audience as possible. Our main point of contact was this FACEBOOK PAGE

• we decided to chose facebook because in today's increasing social networking society facebook is arguably the most popular. with....


* More than 400 million active users
* 50% of our active users log on to Facebook in any given day
* Average user has 130 friends
* People spend over 500 billion minutes per month on Facebook


those statistics are taken from the Facebook Press Pack, 2010

here is a screen print of our Facebook page.




we also sent emails out asking for feedback as well as using twitter and comments on youtube

• Overall the feedback was very possitive! if you look on our facebook page by clicking here you will see this.

• one lady replied early on with "Well done! Really liked it..especially the bit with the boy running down the road. Got the sense of his loneliness and separation from his dad and the vulnerability of his mum."

I think it was this comment that for me personally made me realise that sticking up for the long tracking shot paid off.

• Also we where told the other day that one girl aged 18 watched it with her friend age 17 and her friend had a tear in her eye by the end of it. I think this shows that the effort Abigail and Caroline put into the monologue was really worth it.


From this feedback we have learnt a lot, including many things we would change if we where to re-shoot this piece. we have been told the monologue seems to loose power as the story progresses as well as there not being enough footage of Milo once he had grown up. I couldn't agree more with this last comment as I don't think the equilibrium at the end of the film lasted long enough, we could have possibly included a shot of the older Milo playing with friends/eating McDonald's.


How Did You Use New Media Technologies In The Construction, research & Planning and Evaluation Stages?

• Firstly the use of the blog was vital. it allowed us to all work on seperate elements of research at home yet display the work together, also the navigation bar (shown below)



allowed us to easily flick back to previous pieces when discussing new ideas. the blog was a great idea, and I think really helped us work as a team and bounce ideas back and fourth between ourselves.

• when researching and planning our films there was one site in particular that really helped me personally

BBC SHORTS

this is a great selection of short films and was the source for a lot of my initial research films such as

Cubs


and here is my review of the film




• Digital stills were also really useful for initial research on location.





• Google maps also helped us when planning where we wanted to film, and when filling in this location survey




during the actual production we used...

• Sony HDV camera
this camera was high enough quality to create the short depth of field. which is what made the camera choice easy.

• Dictaphone - the use of sound recording was vital to help give a clean sound to monologue that ran throughout the film.


we then moved onto post production using,


• Final Cut Pro was a must when it came to editing, although our editing was simple using this professional standard editing software just gave us that extra edge that would have been harder to create in 'iMovie'.

• Garage band was used to create our soundtrack, this was used at both start and finish of our film. but we did try to use this as little as possible.

• I edited the poster in Photoshop CS4 which allowed us to simply create different styling, colour and composition

we used similar techniques to those displayed in this video.



• InDesign was the program of choice for the review which I strongly dislike. I really can't get used to the short cut's as all my previous practise has been on Photoshop so force of habit sometimes lead to me making massive mistakes.

and exhibiting the final products

• Facebook was the key source for audience feedback with an embedded video from Youtube and all our friends/contacts were invited to this group.

• YouTube was used to give us a platform for the video to be uploaded to. really useful as it was easy to embed this into other sites and also allowed us to get feedback on the comments section.

Finally.

I am really pleased with the outcome of this entire project. i think the success is a good reflection of the time we spent on this as a group and the effort we put into the work. i think the enthusiasm of the group is shown in our blog with small things such as the mention of my name thanking me for the review of mixtape by Luke Snellin, and the extra little pieces we designed in relation to Little White Lies helped keep this project alive from start to finish. i believe this is what has taken our project that little further from my AS project. which in all honesty by the end of the project i was a little tired of. i think this passion for the piece from the whole group combined with our learnt skills and knowledge is what made this project work.

Tuesday, 23 March 2010

Credits - little white lies - Jack Storer




As further research into the house style of Little white lies, Alex and I have researched into the credits of the magazine. Each issue the credits adapt the story and each name has an image that relates with them personally and the film. for example the Darjeeling limited each of the staff has selected station sign from the Darjeeling track and it has been displayed above their names. in 'The Road' issue each has a photo of what their own trolley would look like if they where in that situation, as anyone who has seen the road will know that Viggo Mortensen's character pushes all his belongings in a trolley as in the story he is homeless. For another example in the 'Where the Wild Things are' issue each of the staff has made a small blue-tak model of a monster and it has then been scanned in. These credits are just abit of fun and a reoccurring feature that the little white lies staff add in each week, and our a light hearted look at the sometimes deep emotional meaning of the props. so following this idea we chose the idea of Favourite drink, as alcoholism plays a large part in our film.

while recreating this page from the magazine as if Milo was the focus film we have realised the light heartedness of their magazine and the approach they take is alot more relaxed than we had first anticipated.

Friday, 19 March 2010

Review - Jack Storer


here is an initial layout plan for our review. it is following all the key conventions of little white lies. we are imagining our film is getting a full page for the review.

conventions.
box's for Title Director Staring and release.
background sketch idea.
logo and page number
star rating (anticipation, Enjoyment, retreospect)

-Jack Storer

FINAL FILM - group

Friday, 12 March 2010

Further research into Little White Lies - Jack Storer







To further understand Little White Lies i am going to take a look at the key elements of the magazine and attempt a few quick mock ups of the style using our film 'MILO' as the cover film.

through doing this I am gaining an insight into all the elements of this magazine. which in time will help with the writing of the reveiw which hypothetically would get a release inside an issue of Little White Lies.

the first double page of each issue contains a very graphic wall paper based on the title film with a quote on the right hand page. at the top of this post you can see my mock up version for 'MILO' followed by the 2 editorial versions the first for the road, then followed by the Darjeeling Limited.


Jack Storer

Initial idea's and What we Want as Final. - Group

After comparing all of the initial ideas as a group we have decided on which area's of each poster we like.

FONT: We have all agreed that the font Caroline found and used on her poster (called My Turtle) is the most effective, but we also like the idea of a childs hand writing but were unable to find a font that worked as well as 'My Turtle'

LAYOUT: We have agreed we want to mix a couple of the layout styles mainly Jack's original idea with the close up of the young boys face and title to the right but we will use Caroline's idea of Milo eating his breakfast.

STYLE: We all really like the text idea in Jack's second poster idea, but will need to see the final version first (leave out the stage directions when copying across the script)
Also we will not print the ending of the script as that would give the point of watching thew film away.


AWARDS: We are still unsure on where the awards will be placed, it will probably follow the same layout as Jack's original but we will have to wait and see. we have agreed on using... 'special Jury award prize 1 world int. film festival' 'Cannes festival' and possibly 'Edinburgh'

as for film networks and funding we definitely want to use 'Little White Lies' as this is an art house magazine that we will later be writing for.

http://www.littlewhitelies.co.uk/


COLOUR: Grey scale. we will use a very minimal style using a lot of negative space to create an individual style and trigger questions in our audience.

MAIN IMAGE: We have chosen to use the image of Milo easting breakfast as we believe this holds the best impact, a simple image that triggers lots of questions in the audience.

Tuesday, 9 March 2010

Poster - Jack Storer


my second idea for the poster.

this is not the final version! just a taster of what it would be like.
it follows the same idea as my initial idea, tracing a photo to create an accurate sketch. just this time i would use text. it will build up to the same visual effect as my sketch just every line drawn would be a line from the monologue. i think this could create a very strong image and if the rest of the group agree I will complete a photo in this style.

Jack Storer

Monday, 8 March 2010

Monday 8th - Jack Storer

Alex and I went into the editing suite early today, and put the footage from Friday's shoot onto the Mac. We are very pleased with the outcome of the shoot and think we have more than enough footage to finish the film off. we have linked together a few more shots as well as overlaying and editing the monologue.
We now have our tracking shot completed, and it has worked very well. the final cut of this long take is 24seconds.
1 of the issues with attempting such a long take was audience attention. But i believe this keeps the audiences attention for the full length of the shot. we will show a few people and ask for feedback.

Jack Storer

Friday, 26 February 2010

Raw footage feedback - Group

We got a few members of our class and also some students who do not do Media to assess our work and give us some feedback on what we could improve/what worked well and any other ideas of what we could do.

Chris Davison - "I liked the way you have used the manual focus, and good use of facial expressions and mise en scene. The shot of the argument is quite long, and so could be shortened" Media student

Sam Jenner - " I liked how the parents were blurred in the background, I think the change over needs a bit of work" Media student

Sam Hillwood - " I like the way that it faded through to show the child ageing. I also liked how the child was in focus and you could see the parents arguing in the background but blurred. I also liked the tracking shot of the child's feet" Media student

Amy Pearce - "The boy was a good actor and I like the storyline. I think its nice how it has a happier ending" Theatre student

Patrick (Milo's friend) - "I think the mirror scene is funny as he looks so sad but it also looks really good" 10 years old.

Monday, 22 February 2010

First Day Back Jack Storer and Caroline Robertson

to conclude the FAILURE of the half term, we have only been able to shoot a couple of establishing shots as the only day where the weather matched that of the weather we needed, Milo our lead actor was unavailable to film. we tried several times to get the group together and to film but somthing went wrong everytime.

we are now behind schedule but will have finished the filming this time next week. we know this will set us back a week but this will give us a chance to edit the monologue and soundtrack for our piece as well as titles, credits and a chance to retouch the past work such as Animatic.

This time will be taken off of editing, but the extra time on animatic and previous work should reduce problems we have when wqe come to editing the work.

overall this shouldn't effect our final piece.

Jack & Caroline

Tuesday, 9 February 2010

Final Monologue - Alex Lloyd, Jack Storer, Caroline Robertson and Abi Black

Shot 15 "I’ve asked mum why they argue, but she just gets upset.
Shot 16/17 (carries through, stops and silent through Shot 18) It starts off as pointless little arguments and just builds up… builds up until one of them snaps, dad. I’ve seen him hit her before. He hits her nearly everyday.
Shot 19/20 I went to play at Sams house the other day, I’d never been to someone elses house before. There was no shouting there, it was strange. Sams mum must be well behaved. ……It didn’t feel like my home. It wasn’t dirty.
Shot 21- silent
Shot 22/23 – We played “Crack the Egg” on his trampoline. It doesn’t work on my own.
Shot 24 – silent
Shot 25 – None of the games we played were as fun at home on my own
Shot 26- silent
Shot 27/28- We had to take our shoes off at the door. Sam is my only friend. I have to play on my own most of the time ‘coz mum doesn’t like people coming over, but Dad’s friends are always round."
Shot 29 – It’s not fair.
Shot 30 – silent
Shot31- They just sit their drinking smoking playing cards and drinking more.

Shot 32 ( 3 seconds in) – 33-
I hate the sound of them laughing…
Shot 33-35 I think mum does too… me and mum sit on her bed but she doesn’t say much we just sit there, I like being close to her when dads not around, I think she knows how I feel. Hiding…that’s what we do when Dad has his friends around, we hide….
Shot 36- ( starting straight away)- He doesn’t like us to be seen….I have to do a lot of hiding, sometimes its fun. I have a tree, I climb all the way to the top and watch the sun go down, I have to race against it getting home before its dark. The tree is just one of my hiding places I’ve found, I go out finding a lot. Mum says not to get into trouble but to be honest I think I’d find more at home.
Shot 37- I hate it, why cant mum and dad be more like Sams? They don’t argue and love each other. Mum tells me she loves dad, but I don’t believe her.
Shot 38- silence
Shot 39- I wouldn’t love someone if they hit me all the time, but dad never hits me. Just mum. Actually no, She would leave if she didn’t love him I guess.
Shot 40 – 41- Love sounds like a funny thing to me. I love football, I like a girl in my class, but not like I love football. I support the Blues, Sam does too. I’ve asked dad to take me to see them play one day, but mum says it could be a long wait.
Shot 42-45- (38 second shot)
Maybe he’ll take me for my birthday. Maybe he’d even let Sam come too! And then we could go to McDonalds! I’d get a massive cheeseburger, and loads of chips and a Mcflurry ice cream, and a chocolate milkshake( or maybe a coke) , and Sam could get a Big Mac with extra cheese and ketchup ( that’s his favourite) and in my Happy Meal I’d get a free toy.

Shot 46-48
Then we’d go bowling, and on the way home Dad would tell me he had a great time, I planned that birthday for weeks, but we never went. And dad never told me he had a great time. But that’s in the past, It’s just me and mum now. Turns out she didn’t love him, not enough to stay anyway.

Friday, 5 February 2010

A quick edit - Jack Storer



this is a quick photoshopped image to show the atmosphere and the colouring we will create with our film.

Thursday, 4 February 2010

Poster Idea - Jack Storer


after studying the other posters I came up with this little sketch.

Tuesday, 2 February 2010

Initial poster research - Jack Storer







I believe that Landscape posters are a lot more artistic and relate a lot more to low budget productions. I have personally noticed this on both low budget film posters and on Indie music advertisements. the above images back up my theory and I want our group to carry this idea accross as it will also relate to the wide screen format we are planning to use.