Audience Feedback

I have made a group on Facebook that has helped us to receive a lot of vital feedback, I will use this to help me with my evaluation.

Some good comments include:

Elizabeth Archer (23yrs) - Wow Alex I really enjoyed it. You've got some great creative shots in there, the soundtrack is amazing, and I like the continual voiceover with no speech actually on screen. The acting is great and the shot of him eating his coco pops very original and in depth - it conveys a lot of information about the story in that ...1 shot which is a really useful tool in a short film.

Caroline Layzell (45yrs) - Well done Alex! Really liked it..especially the bit with the boy running down the road. Got the sense of his loneliness and separation from his dad and the vulnerability of his mum. The boy was really good and liked the idea of seeing him years later as the older boy.

Luke Graham (19yrs) - Really good man, it got me watching till the end :) loved some of the shots: arguing parents out of focus behind the little boy, closing the shutter to end it and using a car (i guess, it was a car rite) to track him running. Really interesting and the continuity was near perfect. Wouldnt be suprised if u got an A :D m...y only criticism would be lack of lighting and nearer the end the child narration could of been cut down a bit, as he seemed to waffle, so when he did talk it would be more powerful. Hope that helps for your evaluation mate, really impressed,

Max Crawley-Moore (17yrs) - Just watched it, is sick. love the narration by the boy and love the jump to older. well done!