Further audience feedback - Caroline Robertson

I have collected more feedback via emails to help us when writing our evaluations :


"Love the bit from 1.27 onwards when the parents come in. The music creates a nice atmosphere and the way in which it is broken off by the two parents storming in has a massive impact on the audience. I like the over-the-shoulder shot where you can see the kid having breakfast whilst they are kicking off in the background.. Big fan of the narration.Its cool I'm enjoying it. loving the bit from 3.45 when you track him running along. The variety of camera shots and angles, and the ongoing music work together to create a feel of real isolation, you really used a lot! Particularly like the shot where he is sat in the tree. get the feel of the frustration this kid has, which is replaced by a feeling of hope when the kid grows up and his mum leaves his dad and the transition from 5.27 to 5.28 is really clever"
-Dan splarn

"Beginning started off a bit slow, but was good once it got going"

– Holly Kinton

"Thats pretty kl. i like how the dingy lighting and the creepy music fits with the style of the movie. The glass bottles banging is effective. the innocence of the little kids voice really suits the narrative "

– Charlie Izard

"I liked at the beginning, the innocent music, which was then broken by the door slamming open, shouting and the bottle being smashed because it was dramatic. The shot from inside the cupboard was nifty.. because...it was a different view? I dunno it was just a nice touch. I liked how it was a continuous monologue of his thoughts, and how the language was like a child, like wanting to go to Mcdonalds and his friend sam etc, as it just made it seem sadder that his dad was a d***. and I liked how the ending was him just shutting the blind, as it was a clear closure to the story"

– Suzanne Ruby