Feedback via email - Caroline Robertson

Emailed some people for further feedback

1. Louisa Brewis, aged 19
yeah its good, definitely demonstrates the situation, i like the transition of the boy growing up but it was quite a little short at the end in my opinion maybe more dialogue of older guy?

2. Lucy Boakes, aged 17
I love it :)..Really liked the way the narration was over the video, it is much more effective having it done that way than if we saw the child talking. The way it links back to the first shot aswell, with the child eating breakfast and then changes into older guy is brilliant, really well done and the progression shot looks really clever. Thoroughly enjoyed watching it, camera shots well done, narration is brilliant and altogether a fab video. Well Done guys xx

3. Alana Stabile, aged 14
this is so good (Y) love how you saw the lad older at the end, and how u dont really expect that kinda story from the average day begging :) really good, sweet film :D x